Awkward Dreams #1

March 25, 2014 § 1 Comment



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§ One Response to Awkward Dreams #1

  • kassmann says:

    I really like the way this comic grew from the last time I saw it. Your coloring choices really compliment your unique rendering of the characters, and it also helps establish the tone. The compositions of each of the panels are interesting, both when looked at individually and as a whole. I feel like they’re effective in helping to tell the story. Probably my favorite thing that you did though would have to been how you established the change from the real world into the main character’s dream. Changing the color of the breaks in between panels helps to establish that difference clearly without being jarring. It would’ve been easy to go too far with it, but I think you successfully avoided that. Overall, I really like how your comic evolved from your initial drawings and embraced its unique feel. Good job!

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